Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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People prefer to live
at
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in
their
convienent
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
convenience
places
.
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.
Some people say that it is advantages to live in
appartmnent
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
,
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,
other think say it is advantageous to live in
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house
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the house, thus
the house thus
thus
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the both
side
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sides
of the argument is supported and refuted by many.
This
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eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the both sides of
advantage
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and disadvantage before any reasoned conclusion is drawn
.
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To begin
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with
,
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,
people who live in
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house
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the house
houses
a house
have the benefit of
privary
the quality of being secluded from the presence or view of others
privacy
and convenience. As most people like to have a big place of their own
,
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,
thus
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they can do
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
they wish
.
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For instance
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,
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,
people who live in
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house
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the house
houses
a house
can
counduct
direct the course of; manage or control
conduct
conducted
a
house
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warming party with loud music at their convenience
,
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,
without any concern of disturbing others. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, people in
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house
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the house
will have privacy by
installating
the act of installing something (as equipment)
installing
a big fence and segregating them from others
.
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.
But in contrary
,
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,
people in
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house
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the house
houses
are mostly targeted by
theif
a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it
thief
their
theft
and criminals
,
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,
as they are alone
.
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.
On the other hand
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,
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,
apartment people will have the
advantage
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of the security
,
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,
low
maintance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
cost and living in a central place
.
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.
As the apartments are mostly nearby the central city
,
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,
people will have the
advantage
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of reaching to any prime location in short time
.
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.
Similarly
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,
maintanace
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
cost of the
aprtment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartment
apartments
and other
facellities
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
will be divided among the neighbours
,
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,
thus
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reducing the burden of cost among them.
However
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, people who live in apartments loose their privacy as their loud voice is audible to the neighbours
.
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.
All things considered
,
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,
both sides has the pros and cons
,
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,
but people who live in country side will have
benefits
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the benefits
by
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of
from
living in
apartment
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an apartment
the apartment
apartments
.
Accept space
.
However
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,
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,
people who live in urban areas will have the
advantage
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by
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of
living in
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house
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the house
,
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,
as the crime rate is less in the urban areas compared to
city
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a city
the city
cities
.
Accept space
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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