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Many people opine that all university students should study whatever they like, whereas some people think the university should teaching some subjects that only related to science and technology for students.

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Many people opine that all
university
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 students should
study
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 whatever they like, whereas some people think the
university
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 should teach some subjects that only related to
science
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 and technology for students. In my opinion, teaching only
science
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 and technology subjects in the
university
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 can increase the number of graduates in these subjects, but it will be better if have the quality graduates in all subjects because students like that thing they learn. If the
university
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 teaching only
science
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 and technology, student will choose to
study
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 some
subject
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 in
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 area. A number of graduates in these subjects will be increased, but some students have to learn about something they do not really like.
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, my friend
study
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 about computer programs at the
university
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 because her father said working in
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 field can make a lot of money. After graduating, she is a programmer, but she does not like her job and try to find a new career. Students who
study
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subject
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 that they like will be a quality graduate and they can be a professional in their career, whether
science
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 or art. They have fun with their job because they like it and their job will useful for other people. My uncle,
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, he really loves music and he chose to
study
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 about music at the
university
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. Presently, he is a music teacher and children very happy when learn with him. In conclusion, every
subject
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 in the
university
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 is useful for people, so students should have an opportunity to
study
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 in a
subject
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 that they like. I am convinced people who love their
subject
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 and their career can be given the benefit for the community.

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