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Band 7

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statemen

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Rose Ann Dagmang, currently holding a titanium master
card
 with your bank.
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My
May
 credit
card
 number is 523482358124695 which have a credit limit of AED15, 000. The
card
 has been in my possession for three years now. I am writing in reference to the credit
card
 statement that you have sent to me.
Last
 month I was on my vacation in the Philippines and I just came back here
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 Dubai, 3 days ago. I have seen few transactions that I am firmly sure I am not accountable
in
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 purchasing. The location of the transactions appears to be in Abu Dhabi which clearly proves that I am not the one who bought the items. I can show you my passport as
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proof that I am out of the country for those dates listed in the statement. I suspect there might be a glitch in your system. I would like you to investigate what happened and send me the revised bank statement as well. Yours faithfully, Rose Ann Dagmang
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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