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Some countries spend lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

#countries #money #bicycle #usage #traffic #congestion
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Nowadays most countries in the world are investing funds to make
bicycle
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 usage convenient.
This
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 essay analyse the reasons behind
this
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 shift as well as provide insight on whether it's a
best
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good
better
 solution to
traffic
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 woes.
To begin
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 with, increasing world population had a direct impact on the increasing number of vehicles on
road
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the road
,
Accept space
,
which leads to
traffic
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 congestion.
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, it
also
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 results in global warming. All countries of
world
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the world
 are
adaopting
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapting
adopting
 preventing measures to overcome
serious issue
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the serious issue
serious issues
 of global warming.
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,
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bicycle
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the bicycle
bicycles
 is an option to get rid of
traffic
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 woes. As some of the countries don't have a proper
pathways
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pathway
 for
bicycle
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 and
bicycle
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 parking spaces, narrower roads in the old areas where riding a
bicycle
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 is almost impossible.
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Bicycle
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The bicycle
A bicycle
 is not a solution to
traffic
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 congestion as
bicycle
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 use is limited only.
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 of all,people don't want to ride
bicycle
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 as it needs

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