2. Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Environmental safety is the accountability of authorities and individuals, because each one and parity has a role in protecting the environment from any harm
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I am of the belief that
individual
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the individual
an individual
has the biggest role
besides
the authorities' roles
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therefore
the both sets of roles should be
collaborated
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collaborating
to initiate the optimal achievement
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essay will tackle the roles of both
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
and citizen should do
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On one hand the roles of human being in protecting
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the environment
are two major ones
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because of
this
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each one should pay attention for each single
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action
which has been doing in his regular activity.
Firstly each
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Firstly, each
citizen should be aware of what can cause harm to the
environmental
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environment
surrounding, due to avoid any type of harm
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Secondly
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it is really important
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for
adherence to these methods which will provide us with
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a safe
surrounding. Research studies have shown that applications of safety measures
such
as separation of organic and non-organic disposables and avoidance of using non-biodegradable and toxic materials which enhance the pollution amount and conserve many of sea
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creatures'
lives.
Additionally
to these measures tackle a myriad of issues
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global
and nationally like global warming
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On the other hand
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the official authorities should investigate two main concerns about environmental safety
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To start with the most significant domain to be
impose
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imposed
rigorous laws to deter any violation of rules and regulation that should be done for
this
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Hence
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periodical monitoring and close observation should be done to ensure that everyone follows the mentioned instructions
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For
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instance, there
are many countries that have achieved great results after imposing legalization of measures related environmental issues
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showing
that fear from penalties can result in revolutionary outcomes
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and preserve safe surroundings for everyone and every creature. In conclusion
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treatment of environmental issues should be prioritized over any other issues
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I am convinced that the case of environmental protection should include many parties to be done efficiently. I recommend that media and public figures ought to engage their efforts toward environmentally related issues like that I mentioned previously.
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