Memorization of information by frequent repetition, namely rote learning, plays a role in many education systems. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that creative artists should have absolute freedom to create their own
art work
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artwork
without any restriction from government. Others believe some form of artifices should not be available to
general public
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the general public
. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss if creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas without any influence by the government. I believe artists should have complete freedom on what they would like to create. By limiting what an artist can create, it is limiting their creativity. Art pieces, no matter it is in words, picture, music or film format, enrich people's mind. What
make
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makes
human different
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a human different
from animal is our ability of complex reasoning, using of complex language, and solve
complicated problem
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complicated problems
. Art work
enable
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enables
us to deliver complex ideas in a form that people can share among people.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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