The world of work is forever changing at a fast pace. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare themselves for work in the future.

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When it comes to work, it's forever changing the world. People are not ready to depend on one single job for their entire
life
due to current working conditions; which is not same as before. Men and Women ideally start their
career
at the age of 24 and work till a maximum age of 60. It's a 35 years of
career
apporximately
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
for a human which is 40% of their
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
. During the
career
, people have to focus on their personal
life
as well, by bringing a balance in both personal and professional
life
Suggestion
lives
. In the olden days, the working conditions were not same as before. The workload for a person on a given day was doable and the organizational
expections
belief about (or mental picture of) the future
expectations
from
Suggestion
of
an individual was acceptable due to less competition at
individual
Suggestion
the individual
and organizational level. Nowadays the competition is huge everywhere, because of which some people end up spending more time in the office focusing on their
career
without knowing that they are
addding
make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of
adding
aiding
too much pressure to themselves, which could impact their health. Among that some people, 50% of them are consciously aware that they are spending more hours in office, which is
invaraibly
without variation or change, in every case
invariably
unbearably
impacting their personal
life
.
However they
Accept comma addition
However, they
are unable to handle the situation wisely to establish a balance. People who are smart have now started thinking about working hard for four to five years, earn good money and later begin a business of their own. Entrepreneurship is always a good idea, as that makes
someone
their own boss. They become the sole authority to decide their environment, timing, deadlines and expectation of work.
This
gives
someone
100% ownership and
parallelly
a tension less
life
rather working for
someone
who decides the working
condition
Suggestion
conditions
on behalf of us. The future of our race must have a very clear thought process in establishing a
career
for themselves. It could be either working for
someone
or establishing their own business. At the end of the day, they must love the job they are doing, should be able to balance both personal and professional and lead a healthy
life
.

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