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8.D.In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by the international fast food. This is having negative effect on our families and societies. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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International fast
food
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 is becoming famous among people, especially, youth and traditional foods are losing its means and value day by day in various developing countries. It has become important to understand the alarming condition and doing some efforts for the same.
This
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 essay will,
firstly
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, point out various ill effects of fast
food
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 on physical and mental health and
then
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 what efforts we can make to change the situation and help the society. Ready-made
food
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, which are easily available in markets seems to be the best solution for the people who find cooking tough and rather, time consuming. People mostly, wants to spend their time on more productive things, like working in offices, which in results are affecting their health not only in physical means but
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 their mental well being.
Firstly
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, Fast
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 can provide an easy option for the current difficulty of at least having a meal and rather, tastier than traditional
food
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, but are actually a long term problem creator.
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, International fast
food
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 not only have its ill effects on fitness, but
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 somewhere, destroying country's culture as the youth is more inclined towards foreign culture including their foods. Now lets talk about the solution of the problem in hand,
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, how can we change
this
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 habit of having traditional meals and popularising our own traditional
food
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. Each country has its own traditional cuisine available and are usually healthier than which is available in the markets, the thing is we need to convey
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 to our people,
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, India has got many cultures and
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food
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 altogether like north Indian
food
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, south Indian
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, Gujarati
food
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 and more. Many ways are available through which we can alter the ways traditional cooking used to happen. Various courses are available on internet through which we can learn how to cook in an easy way,
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, much tastier. In the conclusion, I would say that as the world is developing, we need to mend our cooking habits, so that it provides a solution to the youth by giving them options to save their time in the kitchen.
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, they should start working on their health altogether. f

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