In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co- education or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view ?

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In some parts of the world

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some of the counties have mixed schools and some they separate the two genders in schools.

Mostly

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people agree and feel comfortable going to separate schools

also

some

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rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard

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cultural counties and families agree with that

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However

, not everyone thinks the same

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Some people like to go to mixed schools since they're more fun

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It's

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fun to have

guys

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friends and how girls and boys makes funny jokes in their daily days

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which I personally think it's more joyful and I do prefer that

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People can choose to go to

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act as a barrier between; stand between

separate

schools but

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schools, but

I'm Universities they only have one choice

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interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class

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is obviously mixed universities. If a boy or a girl

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wasn't used

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gender, they

will face a lot of obstacles in college

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Hence

! I think they should experience the nature and the joyful part of mixed schools. In my opinion

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they will learn a lot in mixed schools.

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