The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how
water
is used to generate electricity in a hydroelectric power station. Overall
, the use of water
is different during the day
Correct your spelling
daytime
time
and the night
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nighttime
time
.
Water
from the river is blocked by a dam and stored in a high-level reservoir
. At the bottom of the dam, the intake is opened during the day
while
it is being
closed at night.
In the Unnecessary verb
apply
day
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daytime
time
, once the intake is opened, the water
flows into a tunnel and goes down to the power station. The force of the falling water
makes the turbines spinning
, activating the generator Wrong verb form
spin
while
the water
keeps going to a lower level
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lower-level
reservoir
. Then
, the electricity generated is transmitted to the national grid via power lines.
In the night time
, water
from the lower level reservoir
flows back into the turbines then
pumped to flow the water
back into the high-level reservoir
through the same tunnel that water
flows in the day
time
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, day, time, reservoir with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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