You found a problem with the item which you bought it online. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the item • explain what the issue is • suggest what you expect the manager to do

#item #company #manager

Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the frequent customers of your online store. Today I am writing to express my discontent with the product that I purchased on 22nd September

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2019 from your shop. I ordered three

dresses

, which were imported by you from Pakistan. My order number was JK909. I was extremely excited to get those

dresses

because I had

family

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function and we three sisters had a plan to wear the same

dress

. But,

unfortunately

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it was not possible due to missing

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pant

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in one

dress

. I got two complete sets of

dresses

but on another

packet

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there is no full set

dress

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, along with

pant

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I did not find any lase, which is available with another two

dresses

. As I have paid full payment

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three

dresses

, I suggest that you either send me the pant and lase or refund me the payment

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one

dress

. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully,

Shawlin

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Shaolin

Rishad

Submitted by shawlin90 on Mon Aug 26 2019

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

169 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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