It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

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It is anticipated that in the coming years there will be a higher ratio of senior citizens in comparison to that of

younger one’s

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the younger one’s

in various nations around the globe.

This

essay agrees that due to single

child

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child's

parent or unmarried individual will lead to increase the number of old people in a country.

Firstly

, we will discuss

reason

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the reasons

reasons

behind their increasing

population

Secondly

, we will discuss about the positive outcomes that a country can

provide to most of

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provide most of

the elderly individuals.

First

of all, the main reason behind the increasing number of

old

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older

individual’s is that, as most of the country’s are developing at a high pace resulting

into

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better infrastructure and

medicial

relating to the study or practice of medicine

medical

facilities turns out to be the long

living

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lives

of older people. In the recent

obversation

, it has been noted that in India around 70% of

population

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the population

consist of senior citizens which are able to get the proper health related facilities and accurate

medifications

the act of making something different (as e.g. the size of a garment)

modifications

which result into their increasing life’s.

Secondly

, the concepts like lone parent, adopting a child, unmarried individual

also

tends to increase the

population

of old people as there will be no future successors or the one who can have their name. Nearly 30% of the

population

are not married which is a true example that in

near future

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the near future

the number of

old

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older

people will increase as there will be no younger one’s behind them. In conclusion, I agree that in the

few decades the amount of

elder

advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people is going to be at its peak than that of the younger one’s.

Mon Aug 26 2019

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1Word repetition
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Topic Vocabulary:

aging population
proportion
mentorship
strain
public healthcare systems
pension schemes
workforce
economic growth
automation
consumption patterns
intergenerational solidarity
sustainable living
environmental conservation

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It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays employment options are changing and employees cannot rely on having the same job and working conditions throughout their life. What are some possible causes? Suggest some ways to plan for the future under these circumstances.

With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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