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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint

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In today's lifestyle everyone wants
luxurious standard
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a luxurious standard
 of living.For that
one
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 has to go for a good salary job through which
one
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 gets his dreams
fullfiled
completed to perfection
fulfilled
 as
this
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 is a well known phrase 'All five fingers are not equal'.
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,
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,
every person
have
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has
 different job expectations for their jobs.. According
,
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,
to my
opinion i
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opinion, I
opinion I
 prefer to change jobs frequently.In today's world exposure is very important need.If
one
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 wants to achieve goals in his
life
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life, then
then
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 he has to go for
the better
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the best
opportuniites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 for his future.By sitting at only
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 place
one
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 cannot get
the better
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the best
oportunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 for the future. By changing the companies
one
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 can get the exposure to the different fields of work. Change is the necessity of life and
one
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 should opt
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 change for a better lifestyle. So, it is concluded that as the promotion is necessary for the growth of an employer
.
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.
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, changing the jobs frequently is
also
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 considered to be an important aspect of life. By, changing the jobs,
one
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 can get the appraisal in their income and exposure to new work.
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