Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Now a day, everyone is busy in their life with the work load.It is a well known said

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that healthy

mind

always exists in a healthy

body

.If a

mind

is healthy

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automatically the

body

is healthy. People don't get

time

to do physical exercises for their good health, but sometimes when they get

leisure

they prefer to do brain challenging games and some prefer to rest. In my opinion, I think one should utilise his relaxation by involving in some kind of activities rather than, doing the rest. We have to maintain a balance in our busy scheduled and the

leisure

time

as we get

leisure

time

very less in today's hectic lifestyle.We should try to utilise our

leisure

time

in reading books

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gardening

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doing word puzzles

objective form of "I"

.t.c. By doing all these things, we get relaxed. If we allow our

mind

to rest in

leisure

time

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then

we are on the wrong path

then

. The

Mind

plays

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very important role in our life or we say, it is the most important component of our

body

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it is our duty to keep our

mind

healthy

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by doing brain involving activities. From the above discussion, I concluded that

Mind

is a vital organ of our

body

and to keep

this

organ in proper functioning

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we have to take care of it by indulging in some kind of mental activities or hobbies in our

leisure

time

. Now a day, peoples are suffering from depression problem

this

is all due to the work pressure.So, if we want to live a healthy life, we have to take care of our vital organ.

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Topic Vocabulary:

cognitive abilities
mental stagnation
intellectually stimulating
relaxation
meditation
stress reduction
overall well-being
personal development
life satisfaction
sense of achievement
emotional balance
peace of mind
scientific evidence
memory
learning
creativity
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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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