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The culture and traditions are changing from generation to generation. Why is it happening? What can be done to change it?

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Every age group experiences a
slighlty
to a small degree or extent
slightly
 different
culture
 and traditions because they are constantly changing.
This
 is because some cultures are more dominant and force the other ones to change. Countries must protect their cultures at least on paper by teaching the children on their traditions and values.
To begin
 with, inventions
such
 as magazines and newspapers exposed many countries to different cultures; the internet accelerated the flow of information even more. In today’s world, strong countries like the UK and Germany export their language with the cultures to the developing countries. Young people
can not
can not
cannot
 resist to new traditions because they are being affected by it every day through social media or other sources. To prevent
this
 degradation of old values, the schools need to teach the children their ancestors’ ways. If they do not learn the native
culture
, they will be
vulnarable
susceptible to attack
vulnerable
 against other ones and their effects. The school is not a place to just study mathematics or music, but it is a place where the young minds can be filled with the necessary
information to help them
Suggestion
information, helping them
information helping them
 preserve their unique
culture
. In conclusion, each generation are affected more by different traditions and the technology is not helpful on
this
 subject.
However
, we
can not
can not
cannot
 control the inventions so that we should protect our children by teaching them their
culture
 and values at school.
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