People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Urban places, enormous cities, that mostly the whole public live in nowadays, are not only experiencing the luxurious

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life but

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life, but

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encountering obstacles daily that should be dealt with.

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of the solutions

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these hardships was to travel and start a different quiet-paced

life

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in the regional towns or

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countrysides

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country sides

. It is obvious that

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in large cities is full of worries that surrounds people regularly.

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of all and most notable problem is the traffic jam which postpones any appointments and yields to anxiety once

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thinks of going out, but

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furthermore

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may lead to catastrophic results,

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, car accidents that are frequently happening taking innocent lives with it.

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, due to the mass population

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every day

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lack of fresh air there; these

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the possibility of infection with serious diseases.

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, whilst communicating with various types of humans,

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cannot feel 100

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safe towards himself or his children and what different virtues can be reduced inside them just by talking with

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the wrong persons

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of the suggested methods to suppress and diminish these drawbacks is to call for people to try living in the

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countrysides

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country-side

that might not be suffering

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the same problems.

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, these towns have a deficiency in many aspects as lack of well-established hospitals and

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schools, along

with the widely-spread thought that regional towns lack the basic needs of mankind. But In my opinion, I think the government ought to encourage the society more to try

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thing, since these problems can be overcome easily by some efforts from the country. In conclusion, either living in cities or in

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both have different merits and demerits. Living in cities have been the most frequent standard of

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,

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,

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way can have hazardous effects that are not present in the

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.

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, the government would better speak more about the significant pros of the towns so that people can think of having a better

life

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out there.