In many places new homes are needed,but the only available space for building in the countryside.But some people believe that it is more important to protect countryside and not build a new home there.What is your opinion about this,give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own experience or knowledge.

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The astronomical surge
An astronomical surge
in human population has
further
deepened mankind's challenge and need for new habitable homes. It is not an esoteric fact
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that world numerical growth has climaxed in geometric proportion in the
last
decade.Many
climes
an assertion of a right (as to money or property)
claims
of life have witnessed an in-flowing of teeming immigrants
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,
into their territories owing to stable economic feasibility and political stability; thereby necessitating need to find an appreciable
comportable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
shelters
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shelter
for these people who have
exodused
their
climes
an assertion of a right (as to money or property)
claims
. In these places
availability
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the availability
of
land
for building
are
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is
of grave concern. Whereas
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,
the only available spaces for new settlement are in
countrysides
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the countrysides
. Should these places be utilised for
provision
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the provision
of accommodation?
This
is a question that has attracted ostentatious debates and contrasting opinion in time immemorial. While some school of thought
believe
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believes
that rural areas or outskirts of
country
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the country
with their serene environments
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,
ebullient vegetations and clement wildlife be guided jealously.
Other
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Others
have castigated
such
thought calling it primitive ideology and labelling them retrogressive elements. They believe that provision of an affordable and comfortable home is an is an integral parts of sovereign developmental goals; any available
land
should be explored for
this
purpose.
However
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in my own candid view and succinct opinion
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,
countrysides
should be preserved and not utilised for home construction. Usually
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,
countrysides
are rural areas or outskirts of a place free from human activities that disturb
nature
's balances.
For
instance these
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instance, these
places consist of natural habitation for all kinds of animals in their different species
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which are often used for wildlife or game reserves. Wonders and magnificences of
nature
can be appreciated. Aside
this
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it can
also
serve as
tourist centre
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a tourist centre
attracting global presence
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,
thereby providing colossal means of foreign exchange
earning
the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
earnings
for both local and national
government
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governments
. I could remember a place located ten miles away from our locality
withing
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
our nativity. Wildlife of
this
area is so excellent containing different species of biotic elements. Native people of
this
area earned their living by providing various activities for tourists who thronged
this
tourist hub in their innumerous numbers.Today
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the Aborigines have been displaced
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,
they now live in abject penury and
jentee
marked by refinement in taste and manners
genteel
poverty. All the species of animals have gone into extinction
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because the place has been deconstructed as an estate to provide new habitats for immigrants. Rural areas are usually suitable for various agrarian activities
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because it provides a pleasant fertile arable
land
suitable for plantation fecundity. They are usually free from human activities
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,
via-a-
viz
: Mining
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,
logging
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road construction
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deforestation e.t.c.
which
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Which
usually destroy
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usually destroys
land
fertility. I was with a friend who led a team of agriculturists from
Federal ministry
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the Federal ministry
of agriculture in one of our urban settlements. He complained bitterly that in one of their adventures seeking for suitable arable
land
to raise cocoa nurseries which are to be distributed for farmers. They have to walk
distance
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a distance
the distance
distances
of
kilometers
a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
located far outskirt of the metropolis
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before they can get available space.
Toda
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Today
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,
human activities in construction of new homes have brought a
lots
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lot
of disruption in the balance of
nature
and destruction of beautiful wildlife
,
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,
nature
has bestowed on us.
Therefore
,
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,
it is high time government at all levels legislated against encroachment on
countrysides
and individuals must protect
this
beauty of
nature
.

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