The chart illustrates the percentage change in average house prices in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London by compared the average house prices in 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart illustrates the percentage change in average house prices in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London by compared the average house prices in 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average house prices in 1989.
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The chart illustrates the percentage change in average
house
prices
in New York, Madrid,
Tokyo
, Frankfurt and London by comparing the average
house
prices
in
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1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average
house
prices
in 1989.
Overall
, three of five cities had
the
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average
house
prices
in
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1990 to 1995 lower than the average
house
prices
in 1989,
whereas
there was only
Tokyo
had
the
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apply
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average
house
prices
in
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1996 to 2002 lower than the average
house
prices
in 1989. When comparing the average
house
prices
in 1990 to 1995 with the average
house
prices
in 1989, the average
house
prices
in New York,
Tokyo
and London were cheaper
around
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5% or more
while
the average
house
prices
in Madrid and Frankfurt were higher
around
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3%. The average
house
prices
between 1996 to 2002 in New York and Madrid increased
about
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by about
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5%, in Frankfurt increased
about
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by about
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2% and in London increased
over
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by over
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10%,
whereas
in
Tokyo
still dropped 5% compared with the average
house
prices
in 1989.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 95%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words house, prices, tokyo with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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