Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give opinion.

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One of the most
conspisuous
obvious to the eye or mind
conspicuous
trends in today's modern world that interest quite and
lot
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a lot
of people and
in
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of
controvery
a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement
controversy
is
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are
economical
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economic
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growth
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grown
growing
. It is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
by some that hunger and poverty can be eradicated by economic
growth
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only,
however
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, I
deffer
be different
differ
differed
differs
from them and agree with the statement
thay
pointing out something
that
suggests
thatthis
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that this
growth
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is the major cause to harm our environment. To embark on, supporters of economical
growth
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have innumerable arguments to support their point of
view but
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view, but
main reason
steamming
the territory occupied by one of the constituent administrative districts of a nation
stating
the fact is the monetary
growth
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of society.
In other words
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the more
economi
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the economy
economy
economies
economic
will grow the more people will be wealthy and it will help society to curb the issue related to basic needs
such
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and food,
shulters
a structure that provides privacy and protection from danger
shelters
and cloths. To
jistufy
show to be reasonable or provide adequate ground for
justify
, I would quote the example of developed countries, they are growing
economical
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economically
rapidly and most of the basic issues have been addressed there. It is shown by facts that
this
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is responsible for over-all
growth
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of any nation. On the other side,
peopls
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who oppose
this
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growth
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and says
that is
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detrimental
for
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to
eco system
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Eco system
ecosystem
have evident proofs to support their school of
though
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
.
First
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and
formost
ranking above all others
foremost
is the industrial revolution. To illustrate, for the
growth
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in
econimy goverments
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economy, governments
economy goverments
economy governments
econimy governments
encourag
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encourages
encourage
encouraged
industries and promote massive production of goods which leads to more consumption of natural resources
such
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as water,
fossile
of or concerning the face
facial
oils and
oxyzen
a nonmetallic bivalent element that is normally a colorless odorless tasteless nonflammable diatomic gas; constitutes 21 percent of the atmosphere by volume; the most abundant element in the earth's crust
oxygen
.
Secondly
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, these industries need space for
expension
the act of increasing (something) in size or volume or quantity or scope
expansion
expression
extension
and setting up new manufacturing units which is the main cause of
deforstation
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
.
For instance
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, over 40000
sqkms
a fraudulent business scheme
scams
area has been covered by industries in Delhi/NCR.
What
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What's
more, never ending
desired
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desire
by
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of
corporates
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
prefer
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prefers
machines rather than manpower to work in their plants which leads to the unemployment.
Evantually
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Eventually
, economical
growth
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has more damage
on
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to
invironment
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the environment
environment
. To recapitulate, I reiterate my assertion,
however
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a large groups society
recon
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Recon
economical
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economic
growth
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one of the
adviseable
worthy of being recommended or suggested; prudent or wise
advisable
panaceas to address the issue related to
povery
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
and hunger, I believe that it has more adverse effects that are not
reversable
capable of reversing or being reversed
reversible
.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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