Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although
many governments and large companies have contributed in improving our
environments
Suggestion
environment
, but I strongly disagree with the statement of "Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment."
for
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For
several reasons. I believe that nowadays, people are becoming more aware of their environment by creating things or even taking actions.
For instance
, recently, we notice that there are some people who
initially
cleanse and pick up some trash from the ocean to not only make the ocean more hygiene, but
also
help the animals that are living under. Some of them
also
created a stainless straw to reduce people of using plastic straw.
Moreover
, there are a lot of celebrities and
influencers
who
also
created many songs or posts regarding our environment, for
istance
an occurrence of something
instance
Earth by Lil' Dicky. In the song, there are many deep meanings about our earth and
also
to convince people to contribute in helping the governments and be aware of surroundings. To conclude, even though governments and large companies contribute a lot in making differences, but that does not mean
inviduals
a human being
individuals
can not do something to improve it. We need to unite as a team.

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