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Band 5.5

You have been facing lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • what your expectations are from this work / office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction with the colleague’s
demeanor
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.
From
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past
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the past
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 few days, I am not getting inputs from
engineering
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the engineering
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 department especially changes required to be inbuilt in
last
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 revision of
drawings
. In the absence of modified
drawings
, I am not able to
getting
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 the work complete at
site
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 which
further
 impacting my image in
organization
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. I am expecting the after implementation of necessary corrections and modified
drawings
has
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 to be released for construction within a stipulated time, so work keeps continue at site and
site
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 team
able
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 to complete the project on or before
deadline
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. I am requesting you, kindly discuss with Engineering-Head
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the consequences of delay in
release
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the release
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 of
drawings
 can be and instruct their respective engineers to provide me required
drawings
 or revert me if they need any help from my side. I look forward to
hear
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 from you. Yours faithfully, Sahil Manocha
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