Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Packaging has become an industry today. It prevents damage of the
product
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while transportation. In case of medicines,
packaging
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the packaging
is even more important, as shelf life of the medicine can be affected if
pachaging
the business of packing
packaging
is improper.
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has led to
establishment
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the establishment
of
separate department
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a separate department
in the industry. A lot of money and
brain storming
a group problem-solving technique in which members spontaneously share ideas and solutions
brainstorming
is required
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are required
in deciding the packaging of the
product
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.
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leads to increase in
overall
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the overall cost
cost
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of the
product
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.
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cost
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, in
turn is bore
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turn, is borne
turn is borne
by the consumer.
Although
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packaging is important for the
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product
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product, however
however
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fancy, unnecessary and high
amount
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of packaging should be avoided.
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will curtail the
expenditure
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expensive
cost
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of the
product
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. The responsibility of reducing the
amount
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of packaging lies with the manufacturers and the supermarkets/ sellers. The
manufactures
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manufacture
should provide basic packing to the
product
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which will reduce the
cost
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of the
product
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and will enhance the sales of the
product
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. The manufacturers can
also
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establish storehouses to keep the
product
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on the way to the sellers
/
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supermarkets.
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a low level of packaging would be sufficient for the
product
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. The supermarkets
/
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sellers should should
also
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refrain from selling products with high
amount
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of packaging as it lead to accumulation of packaging material or cartons. These packaging
material
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materials
can either be in
form
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the form
of plastic covers which is harmful for the environment or it can be cardboard cartons which are made by
derooting
preserve by removing all water and liquids from
dehydrating
decorating
trees.
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to
this
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, the customer role cannot be ignored in decreasing the
amount
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of packaging on the
product
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. The customers should understand that plethora of packaging can be a
market
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marketing
gimmick. The
product
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quality has nothing to do with packaging.
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, if
customer
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a customer
the customer
would not
fell
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fall
in for the packaging manufactures will stop applying layers of packaging to the
product
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.
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, it is important to judge
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product
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a product
by its quality and not its cover. A judicious approach of manufacturer, seller
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supermarket owners and customers would reduce the
amount
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of packaging of the
product
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which will eventually decrease the
cost
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of
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product
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producing
.

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