The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

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The table reports information regarding the number of employees and factories in England and Wales, making gender

distinction

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between male and female employees. It is

insantly

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noticeable that the number of

male

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males

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and females decreased over time. To explain

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, the table shows the male

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off with 287,000 in 1851. Over the first decade, it went off to around 140,000. Similar to the male, the female started off from 190,000 to 160,000. Even so, the factories were

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; they increased rapidly even though they went down in 1891.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem?

People are not excercising regularly, even though they know it is beneficial for their health. Why is this a problem? What can be done to tackle it? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.