Some People Say that Parents Should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some people, including me, that parents should motivate their offsprings to participate in

group

activities.

However

, some groups claim that children should be taught how to use their spare

time

by themselves. These two points of

views

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view

will be discussed before concluding. On the one hand, it is thought that children ought to occupy their free

time

by themselves. There are many times that children are left alone by their parents, who have to work long hours, or even when children's peers are busy with their studies. If children learn how to spend their

time

effectively, it might bring about numerous privileges for them, making them more productive and normal members of the society in the foreseeable future. What children could develop when they are on their own is not only improving their critical thinking, say, by engaging in some special playthings

such

as puzzles, but

also

enhancing their self-confidence and creativity, since they may face some unexpected situations.

Furthermore

, the potential drawbacks of playing in solitude

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with

children should not be overlooked. If children spend the vast majority of their

time

by themselves, they may not have adequate opportunities to develop their social skills, making them more isolated and socially naive.

Moreover

, expending a lot of

time

and energy in front of a screen playing video games may be quite inevitable for children if there will be no constant supervision by their parents on children’s activities.

This

would result in numerous health problems, including obesity and damage to children's posture.

On the other hand

, it is

opined

used of mouth or eyes

opened

by many that children should take up well-supervised

group

events, since, in many cases,

such

activities are well-scheduled and follow clear objectives.

For example

, children would be able to immerse themselves in some

group

activities, which give them a golden opportunity to improve their interpersonal as well as social skills. How to be a good team member, how to compete healthily with their peers, how to delegate tasks and come up with new ideas are cases in point. The involved demerits of organised

group

activities might be detrimental, particularly, when

such

events lack well-prepared structures and suffer from the non-existence of permanent supervision. While being a member in

such

groups could be a waste of

time

and energy for children, they might

also

inspire a child to make wrong decisions, since the negative impacts of peer pressure when children spend long hours with their

groupmates

are unavoidable. In conclusion, after hashing out these two points of views, it appears to me that,

although

group

activities might cause some problems for children, they are indispensably beneficial.