The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet.
The line graph represents the fraction of adherents to the vegetarian diet among the UK’s youth between 1960 and 2020.
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, despite periods of fluctuations, the popularity of vegetarianism rose during the six decades surveyed. Going into more detail, from 1960 to 1980, there was a constant rise in the percentage of vegetarian diet followers
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adolescents, and by 1980, vegetarians took up more than one-eighth of the country’s young population. Contrastingly, the 80s and the early 1990s saw a sharp decline in the adoption of vegetarianism, halving to approximately 7% in 1993. The rest of the 90s witnessed erratic development, with 2000 recording only one in twenty British young people excluding meat and fish in their diets. In comparison, the figures 2000s and the 2010s observed increased stability. More specifically, during the 2000s and early 2010s, the fraction of vegetarians in the UK’s youth grew consistently, reaching 10% in 2011, and stabilizing around
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mark throughout the 2010s. Forecasts for 2020
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that the percentage of vegetarians among
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the United Kingdom will remain at 10
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