A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him /her in his/her country.you have never been there before and you need some inform before you leave. Write a letter to the friend . In the letter : Request advise about the gift for his or her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country Find out about the food

Dear Alice, Thank you for your invitation. It is really a really generous offer and thank you for your generosity. I will love to visit you in Houston Texas. I must say that I am really excited about

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trip and the reason is

because

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I have never been to the United States. I thought it will be a good idea to get your husband and the kids something really nice when coming and I will like you to advise me on the type of gift they will like.

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,can you tell me about the kind

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of various

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leisure activities you have around you? because I will

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like to visit exciting places. I would like you to tell me about clothing in your area too. I heard

their

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are a lot of trendy clothes stores in Texas and that they sell mostly Italian designs over there. How true is that

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, what’s the food like? Considering the fact that I have never been to that part of the world I will like to know if I can get African dishes

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Amala, Eba to mention but a few. I really can’t wait to tour the city with you. Your Friend, Yewande.

Sun Sep 01 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

201 words

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