Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Day by day, the
rate
of crime
is increasing, and we need find
what are the causes and solutions in order to prevent Suggestion
to find
further
criminal activity. In this
essay, I am going to discuss about the reasons of increasing crime
rate
and some preventive measures.
Prevention of crime
is the first
step to reduce the crime
rate
rather than putting the criminal in to jail later. At first
, we need to think why criminals do robbing
and stealing from others. There may be a lot of answers to Suggestion
rob
are robbing
this
such
as poverty, jobless and low income. As a consequences
, people may start to think about stealing or robbing from the shops or houses which is easier to get money so that they can support their family for food and basic human needs. The solutions for Suggestion
consequence
this
problem are that the government should implement a better social welfare system to identify the low income families and give support to them such
as providing monthly allowance, healthcare
benefits and free Suggestion
health care
education
. By providing monthly allowance, people can support their families for food and home without worrying about starvation. In addition
, they can access to good education
which can improve or upgrade their skills and can find the job easily.
Another cause can be the unaware the consequences of criminal activity such
as going to jail or prison. Some people may not afford to go to school due to poor income, so they do not have enough education
about what is crime
and what is going to happen if they committed the criminal activity
. To prevent Suggestion
act
acts
this
issue, we should educate about crime
and its consequences when they are young either at home or school and it is the responsibilities of both parents and society. For example
, giving punishment to young kids when they take things without permission so that they will learn about their actions of
doing things wrongly.
In conclusion, poverty and lack of Suggestion
by
education
play major role
in Suggestion
a major role
increasing
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the increasing crime rate
crime
rate
. Therefore
, the government should emphasize on public education
, awareness and reinforce in criminal laws.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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