Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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Day by day, the
rate
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of
crime
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is increasing, and we need
find
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to find
what are the causes and solutions in order to prevent
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criminal activity. In
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essay, I am going to discuss about the reasons of increasing
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rate
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and some preventive measures. Prevention of
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is the
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step to reduce the
crime
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rate
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rather than putting the criminal in to jail later. At
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, we need to think why criminals
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rob
are robbing
and stealing from others. There may be a lot of answers to
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as poverty, jobless and low income. As a
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consequence
, people may start to think about stealing or robbing from the shops or houses which is easier to get money so that they can support their family for food and basic human needs. The solutions for
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problem are that the government should implement a better social welfare system to identify the low income families and give support to them
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as providing monthly allowance,
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health care
benefits and free
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. By providing monthly allowance, people can support their families for food and home without worrying about starvation.
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, they can access to good
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which can improve or upgrade their skills and can find the job easily. Another cause can be the unaware the consequences of criminal activity
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as going to jail or prison. Some people may not afford to go to school due to poor income, so they do not have enough
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about what is
crime
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and what is going to happen if they committed the criminal
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act
acts
. To prevent
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issue, we should educate about
crime
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and its consequences when they are young either at home or school and it is the responsibilities of both parents and society.
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, giving punishment to young kids when they take things without permission so that they will learn about their actions
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by
doing things wrongly. In conclusion, poverty and lack of
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play
major role
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a major role
in
increasing
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the increasing crime rate
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rate
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.
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, the government should emphasize on public
education
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, awareness and reinforce in criminal laws.

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