An organization has given an advertisement for a part-time job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organization. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for the job State when you will be able to join that job

Dear Sir I am writing
letter to request assistance from your prominent agency in securing a part-time volunteer job for local children. I am a recent university graduate with a Bachelor of Education and specification in early childcare. As
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I am taking an undergraduate study, I am looking for part-time work to gain experience and apply theoretical cognition. I
have practical skills which I gained through a
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ten week
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internship at a Montessori school during my undergraduate degree. Here, I have worked with children aged between 3 years to 7 years, and
in addition
, I learnt how to apply the principles of individuals learning in a communal environment. I would appreciate it if you would consider my skills and experience in placing me in a suitable local area for voluntary work. I am available for
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start and am prepared to work three days per week,
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I am contactable on 4475578. I
attached my curriculum vitae which detail my qualifications and experience. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely Kiranprit Kaur
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