People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports.do you agree or disagree?

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Extreme sports are increasingly popular,

therefore

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people doing

such

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sports should be responsible for their own lives

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after all, they are aware of the risks, so workers should not endanger their lives to save individuals participating in these sports. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with

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view.

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, the

rescue

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teams are saddled with the responsibility to save lives of the populace when

their

in or at that place

there

is a potential threat while individuals are enjoying the environment. Indeed, outdoor adventures

such

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as scuba diving, skateboarding and bungee jumping comes with an element of risk;

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, they are trained to save lives in emergencies

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In other words

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, they have the required skills to save lives without posing

significant risk

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a significant risk

on the

theirs

an adjustment made for the weight of the packaging in order to determine the net weight of the goods

tares

;

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;

for example

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, according to a statement released by Red Cross Society in the U.K

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December which stated that they have had over 90 percent

success

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successful

with

few

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a few

of their

rescue

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teams loosing their lives during the

rescue

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mission.

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is attributable to their great skills

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they added.

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, saving lives of misfortune adventurer is not a potential threat of life to them. Another point to consider is that

it is

it's

definitely not fair to individuals involved in perilous sports if they are not saved in emergencies, reason being that

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every life is important. If they can set out to save victims of natural disasters, why not

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a misfortune adventurer

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moreover

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, revenue generated from taxes are used to fund the

rescue

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activities.

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from the revenue generated from taxes, the USA government

spent

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spends

$5million annually on search and

rescue

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missions (SAR). Since individual doing extreme sports are

member

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members

a member

of the society,

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, they deserve fair treatment. In conclusion

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while some argue that persons involved in perilous sporting activities like skateboarding and ice-skating should be solely responsible for their own lives, so

rescue

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workers should not endanger the lives for individuals doing the sports. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with

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, as

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would not be fair

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the minority participating in these sports

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moreso

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more so

, regardless of the circumstances

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it is the responsibility of the

rescue

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workers to save lives

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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349 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

inherent risk
assume full responsibility
acknowledging
engagement
unduly
voluntary risks
extreme sports enthusiasts
strict safety protocols
mandatory training
mitigate
thrill
personal satisfaction
endangering
rescue personnel
drain public resources
divert emergency services
critical interventions
personal accountability
consequences
moral and practical burden

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