There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir
I am writing
this
letter to formally bring to your notice that your bus
that shuttles between Aka road and Abak road at a service route for residents in Power City Estate has really been disappointing us for the past two weeks.
It is with great displeasure that I bring to your notice the tension and delay your transportation system have caused me for over two weeks now through her disappointment. It is annoying that your driver arrival the bus
stop very late these days knowing that many of us living in this
estate are civil
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servant
and have to leave our location on time in other to beat the traffic. Not only that, every morning, they will never cease to stop by the filling station to buy fuel which ends up spending quality time on a spot because the queue is always unspeakable early hours of the day.
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servants
Consequently
, this
attitude by your drivers is beginning to affect the trust I have for your service because I cannot imagine waking up as early as 5:30am and get to the office by 10am. It is unacceptable and against our company ethics. In
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last
one was a threat for 2 weeks suspension. Furthermore
, my last
salary was not complete because of my lateness to work. So it is very frustrating that your bus
service is having this
negative effect on me.
In my opinion, I will advise that your driver responsible for my route should be cautioned and let him know that my complain
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Additionally
, your drivers should learn to fill the vehicle’s tanks in the night against the next
morning to ensure her
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stop timely.
I hope my letter will be looked into and as well given a
due consideration. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours Faithfully
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite