Alternative energy resources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use power our cities and transport.

Some people say that getting
energy
from
nature
is costly and needs a
lot
of special technologies and experts rather than receiving the
energy
from coal, oil and gas which is used to light up towns. In my point of view, it is true enough that retrieving
energy
from sun,
wind
and wave needs a
lot
of various
methods but
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methods, but
the cost may be lesser as compared to using oil or gas because the
energy
from sun, wave and
wind
is free. Producing
power
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the power
from
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of
nature
is not an easy job and it required a
lot
of advanced technologies and experts who understand how to do. The reason is that
wind
direction can change at
anytime
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any time
as well as wave so we need people who know these things well.
In addition
, it requires a
lot
of space to build machines to catch
wind
so it is usually
build
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built
in rural regions.
On the other hand
, getting
energy
from coal, oils and gas is easy because we just need people and machines to drill to get resources and it is so simple as compared to use the natural resources.
However
, getting
power
from the
nature
looks complicated to produce, they may not be as expensive as others.
Initially
, they will cost a
lot
of money to build machines and hire experts, they will save a
lot
of money in
long run
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the long run
because
energy
from these will never die and they are free to
use unlike
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use, unlike
the getting
power
from oils, gas or coal because we need a
lot
of people and machines to drill out oils or gas.
In addition
, there may be less oils or gas production in near future because of shortage of resources and they may run out one day.
For instance
, the price of oils jumped up to sky high in recent
years
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years, therefore
therefore
people started to find other ways to generate the
energy
. In my point of view, production the
power
from the
nature
is complicated and expensive
initially
but it will bring a
lot
convenience in the future.
Therefore
, I partially agree that they are more costly and complicated as compared to
oils
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oil
, gas and coal. It is true that we need to do a
lot
of work
initially but
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initially, but
it can save a
lot
of money and will be more convenience in the future.

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