Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Now a days many students are taking leisure
time
between school and university due to improving the knowledge and experience
on
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in
the field and many people are
recommended
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recommending
this
but same
time
other people
are not recommned
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are not recommending
are not recommend
have not recommended
are not recommended
don't recommend
do not recommend
this
due to it's
impacting
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impact
on their
future
carrier. In
this
essay I will argue
gap
year is best
between
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among
highschool
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high school
and college to improve the skills.
Firstly
, Now a days many young
kids are intersted to
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kids are interested
kids are interested to
kids are entrusted to
take
gap
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a gap
the gap
between studies due to they have to know the current and
future
market trend
hence
they can observe the globalization things and it's worth for
future
learning skills rather than to continue legacy methodology
.
Accept space
.
Secondaly
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Secondly
, due to break on
studies many
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studies, many
university students are
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
to work in aboard
hence
they will learn new things easily and same
time
they can know the value of money
therefore
it's very useful in the carrier and plan the life balancing. For
Examaple
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Example
in USA, Chicago university is very much
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to take new students with
gap
year because they have very good analyse skills and they don't
required
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require
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
therefore
automatically saving the
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
money.
On the other hand
, some teachers
denayed
declare untrue; contradict
denied
that students should not take any free
time
between studies due to they will
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
one year and others move forward, neither that many higher educations and companies are not taking for
future
education and jobs because they don't know what he/she did in the free
time
. In Conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have strongly
agree
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agreed
that students should take
gap
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the gap
a gap
between higher educations
therefore
they can easily understand
gloabal
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
market trend and same
time
they can build the confidence based on their work
experience
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experience, hence
hence
they can build new startup companies and useful to the nation, rather to continue the course and no
future
plans.
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