Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Now a days many students are taking leisure

time

between school and university due to improving the knowledge and experience

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the field and many people are

recommended

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recommending

this

but same

time

other people

are not recommned

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are not recommending

are not recommend

have not recommended

are not recommended

don't recommend

do not recommend

this

due to it's

impacting

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impact

on their

future

carrier. In

this

essay I will argue

gap

year is best

between

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among

highschool

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high school

and college to improve the skills.

Firstly

, Now a days many young

kids are intersted to

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kids are interested

kids are interested to

kids are entrusted to

take

gap

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a gap

the gap

between studies due to they have to know the current and

future

market trend

hence

they can observe the globalization things and it's worth for

future

learning skills rather than to continue legacy methodology

Accept space

Secondaly

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Secondly

, due to break on

studies many

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studies, many

university students are

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

entrusted

to work in aboard

hence

they will learn new things easily and same

time

they can know the value of money

therefore

it's very useful in the carrier and plan the life balancing. For

Examaple

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Example

in USA, Chicago university is very much

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

to take new students with

gap

year because they have very good analyse skills and they don't

required

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require

tution

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)

tuition

therefore

automatically saving the

univeristy

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

money.

On the other hand

, some teachers

denayed

declare untrue; contradict

denied

that students should not take any free

time

between studies due to they will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

one year and others move forward, neither that many higher educations and companies are not taking for

future

education and jobs because they don't know what he/she did in the free

time

. In Conclusion,

refers to the speaker or writer

have strongly

agree

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agreed

that students should take

gap

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the gap

a gap

between higher educations

therefore

they can easily understand

gloabal

involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

global

market trend and same

time

they can build the confidence based on their work

experience

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experience, hence

hence

they can build new startup companies and useful to the nation, rather to continue the course and no

future

plans.

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Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Fully explain your ideas

ome people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In many countries government are investing on new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening. Do you think this is an approciate use of government money?

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students. Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?