Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Now a days many students are taking leisure
time
between school and university due to improving the knowledge and experience on
the field and many people are Suggestion
in
recommended
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recommending
this
but same time
other people are not recommned
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are not recommending
are not recommend
have not recommended
are not recommended
don't recommend
do not recommend
this
due to it's impacting
on their Suggestion
impact
future
carrier. In this
essay I will argue gap
year is best between
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among
highschool
and college to improve the skills.
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high school
Firstly
, Now a days many young kids are intersted to
take Suggestion
kids are interested
kids are interested to
kids are entrusted to
gap
between studies due to they have to know the current and Suggestion
a gap
the gap
future
market trend hence
they can observe the globalization things and it's worth for future
learning skills rather than to continue legacy methodology .
Accept space
.
Secondaly
, due to break on Suggestion
Secondly
studies many
university students are Accept comma addition
studies, many
intersted
to work in aboard having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
hence
they will learn new things easily and same time
they can know the value of money therefore
it's very useful in the carrier and plan the life balancing. For Examaple
in USA, Chicago university is very much Suggestion
Example
intersted
to take new students with having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
gap
year because they have very good analyse skills and they don't required
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require
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
therefore
automatically saving the univeristy
money.
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
On the other hand
, some teachers denayed
that students should not take any free declare untrue; contradict
denied
time
between studies due to they will loose
one year and others move forward, neither that many higher educations and companies are not taking for fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
future
education and jobs because they don't know what he/she did in the free time
.
In Conclusion, i
have strongly refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree
that students should take Suggestion
agreed
gap
between higher educations Suggestion
the gap
a gap
therefore
they can easily understand gloabal
market trend and same involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
global
time
they can build the confidence based on their work experience
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experience, hence
hence
they can build new startup companies and useful to the nation, rather to continue the course and no future
plans.Submitted by tadinarenreddy on
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