You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter • advise them of your situation • explain how this is affecting you • request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir I am writing
this
letter with regards to the loss of my identification
card
. I am a student of class 12 division 'B'. My Name is 'Simranpreet Kaur. I lost my school badge. I tried to find out my information
who
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to apply for a new
card
. The Human Sources department said it will take 2-3 weeks and you have to complete some formality before applying for a new dog tag. As you know
exam
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will be starting soon, I am not able to access my school facilities like sports without Id proof.
Firstly
, I have to explain all the information to
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then
he allows me to enter
in
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school. Another problem
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that
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I face
everyday
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because I will not get student
concession
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on food items and buses. I have
selected
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for
debate
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competition, they will not allow me to participate without
Insititute
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identification
card
. I request you to issue a new identification
card
as soon as possible. Please consider my situation and do needful. your's faithfully
simran
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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