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More and more women go out to work. Is it the government's responsibility to subsidise them and provide free staff and facilities to care for their children? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

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It is  undeniable  fact that women's role in The society has changed. They're doing jobs in every sector to the authorities should help females in order to look after their children while they're working by giving them facilities.
This
 essay agrees with
this
 statement and believe  that
government
 should support them by providing free
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
  for their offspring. It will make them free of the burden and
then
 talk about how
this
 thing can motivate mothers to
work
 harder.
To begin
 with
,
Accept space
,
government
 should organise free
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
 for female workers because it reduces the responsibilities toward children.
In other words
, if the authorities take the responsibility of children, mothers will get a help in managing their
work
 and motherhood. Women can rely on them without any hesitation so they can
work
 stress free.
For instance
, Canada is the country where women do jobs without any burden of children because Canada's
government
 should give free
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
 for the children. Another factor to consider is that, women get encouraged by these facilities because they will
work
 hard because they do not have to look after their offsprings so they will not be tired. To put it
in other words
, free stuff is beneficial for mothers because they have to do less effort at home so they will be fresh in the workplace. To illustrate, a recent research carried out by Cambridge University found that mothers who have
such
 facilities are fresh and hardworking in the workplace. In conclusion, after having discussed pertinent points, I believe that with the help of free stuff provided by
government
 is advantageous for women that
work
.
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