You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Hey, I hope you’re doing fine. I received your letter yesterday regarding the suggestions whether to pursue studies or to join a
job
. As it is your career decision, I want you to take your decision maturely. I know you have discontinued your education due to family financial reasons. I would suggest you Use synonyms
to
join a Remove the particle
apply
job
so that it will be good for your future.
Use synonyms
Although
you have Linking Words
college
gap I know you can study well and graduate, still I feel you wouldn’t enjoy your studies to show interest as much as you used to be before.
I am suggesting you Correct article usage
a college
to
search for a Remove the particle
apply
job
which you enjoy at most and makes you independent. It Use synonyms
also
helps you to support Linking Words
you
and your family. I remember you used to love Correct pronoun usage
yourself
teaching
profession. Nothing makes you happier than doing what you love. I think you should searchCorrect article usage
the teaching
a
Change preposition
for a
job
as a teacher, which can help you to educate many students and a good opportunity for you Use synonyms
learn
new things Fix the infinitive
to learn
everyday
. I hope my suggestions are useful to you, get back to me if there’s anything else.
Bye! Godspeed!Replace the word
every day
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,