It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said by many people that most of the athletes are good at their sport or any field. I highly argue that I believe success only comes from hard work done with a good amount of practice. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides and will prove that it is only possible with extensive effort. Sometimes different things
also
play a role in any person's success.
Firstly
, some kids
are
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good at it because of the environment or good genetics and insertion. In music industries, if you have a
good
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better
voice than there are more chances that you will outplay others easily, just because of that, chances of being successful will be increased at a
great
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greater
margin. Not to mention about genetics in sports, it is a thing where professional might have a slight eagle, only if they the good
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genes
.
For example
, if a basketball player has a good
height
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height, then
then
, he/she will outperform others. No matter how good your body is if it is not utilized for
training
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training, then
then
you will not get any win. To beat others more effort is required, if anyone starts doing it at an early stage
then
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than
there are more chances of them being better at it than others. If any child starts learning the karate in the beginning
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than
in
adulthood he
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adulthood, he
/she will be pro because of more knowledge and experience.
Furthermore
, the reaction time will be good so his
agileness
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.
Additionally
, if anyone is
played
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playing
different type of
sports
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sports, then
then
it will be obvious that they will find in which sport they are good at it.
As a result
, they will be more competitive than others in all categories. In conclusion, having
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gifted things doesn't always help. It can a little
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bit, but
not that much, hard work is needed to step up the game.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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