The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the number of internet based shopping is booming which eventually creating much less impact on local stores.

Although

the local departments in cities and towns are in an extinct, people are more dependent and finding it useful to buy things from online.

However

, I completely agree that in future there will be no local store as people are becoming

more busier

Suggestion

busier

day by day

instead

they can order anything from sitting anywhere which is more

time

saving. On the one hand, living in a competitive world makes human races to an advanced level. Every single moment of life people passing are valuable. Shops in local community

holds

Suggestion

hold

a certain amount of products and the customer need to buy them by coming physically. Whereas the online shop owners have a storage consisting proper invoice of consuming goods. Any buyer from any place around the country can order the desired product can be supplied from the main storage.

In addition

, it takes

time

to go to a shop and choose the product quality and quantity. Sometime carrying with cash might

also

be dangerous because most of the

time

shops are being attacked by robbers. So people find it safer and faster to purchase things from online as it offers quality checks, online payments and refunds if damaged.

On the other hand

, it seems unsecure to shop from a departmental store as it does not offer any refunds.

Moreover local

Accept comma addition

Moreover, local

shops

also

consume

time

when someone come here to buy something.

Furthermore

popular super

Accept comma addition

popular, super

-shops often create public harassment

such

as traffic jam, public congestion and noise. In conclusion, it is more beneficial for one to choose his products by sitting at home or at

office

Suggestion

the office

rather than going to the store. If all the shopping gets online based than there will be less traffic congestion issues and city can have a serene environment.

Submitted by maxman016 on Sun Sep 08 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

311 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
augmented reality
showrooms
carbon footprint

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style.
Hello neighbor, the reason I came to you is because your dog's voice never stops. It barks both day and night. It is disturbing our peace. He is even raising the whole neighborhood. We don't sleep at night, we go to work in the morning if we want to sleep during the day. We don't even watch TV on weekends.
5.5
band
First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?
There are no doubts, that the picture that a unknown individual forms in the mind of a person who meets with him at first time is crucial. I agree with people, who believe that the performance in an interview is the main factor of achieving a nice work.
<4
band
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the continuous development of science and technology, our life become more and more convenient. Recently, techology allows us to read everything online without printed newspapers or books, And this makes us wonder if there is nobody will buy printed newspapers or books.
6.5
band
Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently, people have different views as to whether modern innovation has changed social capability, while others think it has reduced social interactions. Despite the fact that new technology has many benefits to global society, I believe that face-to-face in the real world is the most important for individual life.
5
band
Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, there are many people who live in a country where you have to speak a foreign language while others think that it can lead to a negative effect on their life and this country. Although it has some disadvantages to live in a different country, I belive the benefits of a living in a country where you don't have your nationality have more merits.

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style.

First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?