In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members. Do you agree?

Presently seems to have an increasingly widespread discussion about retirement, generally speaking. Many stands that the elders should

to live

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live

at some stage in a retirement home, while others affirm that the family members must to

care

of their needs.

This

essay is going to depict

this

topic using relative arguments to conclude

this

issue. Nowadays people are busier, it is a fact. We are working longer hours and it is required of us to study more to be able to fit into the work field. Some decades ago, at their 30's out grandfathers and grandmothers already were living with their offspring and with a life relatively stable. The society of that time could to offer that.

In addition

,

this

lifestyle could allow them to take

care

of their parents and son on. Unfortunately the society

have changed

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has changed

quite a lot, because we live in a community with much more people and seems that everything have been done in a serial production way.

Hence

, for we

be

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are

able to afford the necessary time to take

care

of the needs of one elder, we would must quit our jobs, and it would be unsustainable because we were not going to receive more our income. Many retirement homes present a quite amazing structure, which means that all the needs that the

olders

a person who is older than you are

elders

others

orders

would require will be there.

For instance

, doctors, psychologists, cookers experts in nutrition, are going to be there among others well prepared professionals.

Furthermore it

Accept comma addition

Furthermore, it

still safer for those who live there, because we

now

be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about

know

that our community can be

such

a violent environment. Having said that, we can agree that it can be a big deal for the families as well as for those who will live there. To conclude, it seems to be a bit insensible for many to

made

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make

the decision of putting their father or mother in a special house. But if we look at the big picture, their socialization and aid would be much better. Of curse that they should not be

forgot

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forgotten

,

contrary

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the contrary

of that, they must to be treated with love and

care

, and always been inside of the family events.