Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, parents play a vital role in the development of their children. Many individuals think that parents should motivate their children to indulge in group games or activities in their leisure time. Some believe that

experience

gained while working or playing alone by their own in more beneficial.

This

essay will discuss both the sides, providing my opinion in the end.   On the one side, Woking, playing, and gaining

experience

at an early age in group work or jobs gives us more satisfaction because, in a team, we can learn from other individuals with unique knowledge and

experience

.

In addition

to

this

, parents give their children more freedom to do activities, results in building

more social life

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a more social life

for themselves as well as children.

Thus

group activities lead to a

more happy

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happier

society.   On the other side, there are some parents thinks

individual learning

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the individual learning experience

experience

for children is more advantageous. Children have more freedom

this

way which result

into

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in

becoming more independent person in life for the future. But guidance from other people is very rare in these cases which is a downside. In an independent survey, it has been found that children are 70% more smart thinker and intelligent who works and learns at their own.   To sum up, I strongly believe that teamwork

experience

for children at the early stage of their lives is more beneficial. The world is becoming so isolated by the days and to break

this

isolation in near

future parents

Accept comma addition

future, parents

should encourage their children to take part in teamwork organized by people and society.