Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While some people believe that artists should be given a certain amount of independence in
order
to maintain their creativity. Others believe that it is important to give them absolute liberty to express their ideas and thoughts. I completely agree that it is crucial for artists to give them some freedom
but not a total one. It is because in this
life we have law
and norm that prohibit us to do as we like. Suggestion
a law
This
includes artist who should respect this
regulation that we create order
in society. This
essay will discuss this
view using examples to support the argument and demonstrate some points.
I believe that it is important for artist
to maintain their ability by giving them Suggestion
artists
an artist
freedom
but not absolutly
one. It is because they can produce art which is violating not only completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
law
but Suggestion
the law
also
another person's right. For example
:
there is a Accept space
:
paintings
created by a painter about the appearance of Suggestion
painting
president but
resemble as a king because he wears accessories Suggestion
the president, but
the president but
such
as crown and royal stick. This
image actually an expression as a critic to country's leader because he acts like a kingdom ruler which rule without control from house of representative. In my opinion, this
kind of art has break the value of law
and other order
in society because it is attack
the Suggestion
attacking
people
Suggestion
person's
person
persona
and Suggestion
personality
also
a humiliation to our leader.
In conclusion, I certainly believe that freedom
is important for someone who work in the art field in order
to develop their ability in this
area. However
, we must concern that we live in community that tied by law
and order
to keep the people safe and secure. Because of this
reason, it is important to give worker in this
sector freedom
in certain limitation so there is no violation against people’s rights and law
.Suggestion
laws
the law
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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