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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest

for

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the position

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Land Surveyor in your company. I have completed my

bachelors

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degree from the

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university

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of Delhi in India in

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of civil engineering with majors in the course of surveying. My

post graduation

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is in construction management from George brown college in Toronto. I have 2 years of experience as

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with

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company known as Aecon group which is specialized in land development. Most of my past jobs were in the

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using instruments likes laser reader, and GPS extra to take

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from the ground. As my education and experience

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in the construction

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. I am physically fit to work in any environment in the

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position required.

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, I have a certificate in advance surveying from

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governement

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government

which will be a great asset for the position. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Rajbir Singh

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people think that governments should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

University should offer to choice one subject to students instead giving multi subject . To what extend do you agree with or not?

Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Only 20% of Tech Jobs are Held by Women. What problems do women face that prevent them from getting these jobs and what must be done to change this situation.