You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, * introduce yourself * explain the situation * say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Divya, Writing to raise my concern about the
phone
which I bought from one of your store
last
Sunday. I and my Husband very exited
to visited your Correct your spelling
excited
store
to buy iPhone XS Max to gift him on our 5th marriage anniversary on 10th September but our exitement
was not long -lasted soon and it ruined our celebration spirit.I am hoping that you would take Correct your spelling
excitement
actions
to improve your Fix the agreement mistake
action
product
quality and maintain your reputation.
Let me explain my concern in more detail.I am regular
customer of your Electronic outlet Add an article
a regular
store
because you guys maintain hygiene, Good ambience ,staff behavior
and above all good Change the spelling
behaviour
product
quality.But last
time it was a big disappointment. I had appointment
slot booked well in advance but it was allocated to someone else, which is not acceptable as it hurts customers' faith in your service.Correct article usage
an appointment
Moreover
, the product
service was less than average. The phone
touch screen is freezing itself after two days of use. We mentioned that phone
was not under proper working condition but no comment or apology was made at the time.On top of that, Correct article usage
the phone
phone
charger stopped working completely! Though we complained about our problem to your staff , she did not mind us and Correct article usage
the phone
instead
told us to complain to the manager.
I had a high expectation from your store
but got equally frustrated. I would really appreciate if
you could take proper action about Correct pronoun usage
it if
this
inconvenience that we had due to the product
that we bought at your restaurant.Please offer the best possible services , Quality product
experience and efficient staff to your customers.
I look forward to your immediate response regarding this
.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite