Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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e
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At
moment, a lot of people prefer to buy
food
to make it by them self. In my opinion, there are costs and benefits of
this
situation. In
this
essay, I will explain about advan
tages and
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the advantages
disadvantages of
this
trend with some examples to demonstrate some points. It is no doubt that buying
food
is more practical than make it by our self. Because of
this
reason, many people especially who do not have much time to provide by thems
elf pref
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
er
this
way.
For example
: bu
ss
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:
i
nesman who
a person engaged in commercial or industrial business (especially an owner or executive)
businessman
is ve
ry busy man choose to b
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has very busy man chosen
is very busy man choose
uy
food
rather than cook at their house. Another reason why people prefer to consume
food
outside is because they are not handy at
this
skill. Because of
this
reason, they prefer to eat in restaurant because it has more
delicious cuisine than
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a more delicious cuisine
food
that
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the food
they made by them self. I do not overlook the other side too. In my opinion,
this
trend has disadvantages
such
as health risk caused by non-hygiene
food
.
For example
, in
this
day, many people suffer from disse
ase caus
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
ed by consuming unclean
food
. More
over, in
in addition
Moreover
this
modern life, major
ity of p
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the majority
a majority
eople does
not concern abou
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do not concern
t their healthy life
style as l
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
ong as they do not hungry.
This
reaso
ns infl
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reason
i
ct more
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inflicts
In conclusion, there are advantage and disadvantage of
this
occasion. I am really sure that consuming
food
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