Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Over the years there are certain people to choose

self

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employed rather than to be part of an organization. And it still

exist

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exists

has existed

until now. In the

first

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they enrolled in school for long years. Since primary up to

college which

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college, which

is to learn, to discover talents and

skills and

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skills, and

it comes to the level of life which they were

chosing

one who is the object of choice; who is given preference

chosen

choosing

causing

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thier

of them or themselves

their

three

courses for the future jobs. Nowadays our country facing

difference problem

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different problems

different problem

a different problem

such

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as

unemployent

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

.

the

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The

main disadvantage of

this

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issue

were

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was

mostly the graduated students they choose to be

self

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employed rather than to work in a company. As

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

've observe

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've observed

mostly the people have more

ambitions

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ambition

to

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thier

of them or themselves

their

life which since in the

fist

the first or highest in an ordering or series

first

they study hardly for too long. But most people think of it after

finished

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finishing

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thier

of them or themselves

their

studies they

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studies, they

studies them

studies them them

aspiring to get a better

job

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to

paid

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pay

of

from a particular thing or place or position

off

what they invest

such

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as

money

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,

time

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and efforts and

ect

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act

eat

.

probably

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Probably

our

goverment they

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government, they

government they

are not sure that most people can work in a company. Especially the fresh graduates they are wasted

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thier

of them or themselves

their

tier

there

time

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to find a

job

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but they suddenly fell.

most

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Most

of them

instead

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of waiting for too long to get a

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job but

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job, but

they choose to be

self

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employed rather than to wait for long.

Mostly being

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Being mostly

self

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employed they

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employed, they

invest

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thier

of them or themselves

their

money

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for selling in online. Or sometimes they are the supplier of

certains

definite but not specified or identified

certain

curtains

cartons

products. The main disadvantage, they spent

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thier

of them or themselves

their

money

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for nothing which it can

gives

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give

to them a desperate to get a

job

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,

waisted

serving no useful purpose; having no excuse for being

wasted

a large amount of

money

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for too long in schooling. And they do not have a

benifits

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benefit

benefits

and

inssurance

promise of reimbursement in the case of loss; paid to people or companies so concerned about hazards that they have made prepayments to an insurance company

insurance

from the company

incase

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in case

of something will bad happens to them. Mostly the people choose to be

self

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employed they

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employed, they

spent a large of

money

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for investment

then

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time

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consumming

very intense

consuming

.

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a

business

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they should invest

time

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for planning how to come up a

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business especially

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business, especially

if they lack of experience in

business

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.

it

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It

could be possible that

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thier

of them or themselves

their

there

business

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will fail. In

generally

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general

, after the

writter

writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)

writer

writers

rider

discuss the

disavantage

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantage

of the

self

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employed. Which are most of the people chose to be

work

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worked

working

by own than to be part of an organization. There are certain cases that it could be significant in the disadvantage of being

self

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employed.