Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

People believe that

gun

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weapon should be legal for protecting themselves and reducing the

crime

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rate. In my opinion, I completely disagree with

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idea, using guns can make people feel safe, but it can increase the

crime

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rate.

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, I think

gun

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weapon should be illegal for almost everybody. On the one hand,

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weapon is used to shoot, hurt, or kill someone.

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,

allowance

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the allowance

of governments to

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guns can lead people buy them more; people can hurt easily other ones that can increase violence and

crime

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rates, and

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result in more the deaths.

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, when people are angry, loss control their emotions and feelings, contrast with others, they can have unreasonable and bad activities

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as hurting some else which can make them regret, badly, they can kill others if they own guns. A great deal of

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evidence

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indicates

that the number of criminals in countries where guns are legal to

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as United States is more than one in countries where people must not

use

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guns as Vietnam.

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, owning and using a

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can affect people’s psychology and

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

to become more violent and commit crimes easily. People can feel that hurting others

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with

guns is just self-

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

and not

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crime

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a crime

, they are not false. They can

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guns to revenge or threaten others. An example of

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if

authorities

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the authorities

allow people to

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guns, robbers can take advantage of

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that they buy guns and

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guns

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to

threaten people and easily carry out their

crime

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. People will worry about that they can be hurt or killed when guns are used popularly. In conclusion, I believed that guns had better illegal to own and carry because they are dangerous weapons, and allowance to

use

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them can increase the violence and

crime

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rates.