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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

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7pm That will just about do for today, and for
this
series
. Thanks to all of you for all your comments, it's been a rollercoaster ride, from 122 for 8 at Edgbaston, to Archer's spell at Lord's, to Stokes' nonsense at Headingley, to Smith's
indomitability
 at Old Trafford, and all the way through to
this
 final day and Wade's over-my-dead-body
biffing
an ardent follower and admirer
buffing
. It's been gripping throughout, and a tribute to the characters on both sides. Have a read of Andrew McGlashan's match report, and stay tuned for Dan Brettig, Alan Gardner, Mel Farrell and Mike Hussey's post-match and
series
 analysis. From all of us at ESPNcricinfo, thanks and goodbye, and see you
next
 week for the County Championship climax! So, the Specsavers Trophy is drawn! Scenes as Root and Paine grin for the camera. But here comes the proper job. Australia retain the Ashes! Champagne sprays, but Justin Langer on the balcony looks like he's chewing a wasp...
he's
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He's
 not a happy
chappy
(informal) man
chappie
...
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...
muted
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Muted
 celebrations on the podium too, but a lap of honour now. Contentment, but not a lot of satisfaction if truth be told...
it
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It
'll do, nothing more! Shoaib: "It's been an absolute
honor
bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
 to watch Smith bat in
this
series
 it was like watching God having a bat, Congratulations Aussies for retaining the Ashes. Thanks Team Cricinfo (Especially Miller) for beautiful commentary and comments.I
am watching
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have been watching
have watched
 cricket for 16 years and
this
series
with out
in absence of
without
 a doubt was the best
series
 Long Live Test Cricket and once again thank you so much Team Cricinfo."
Well thank
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Well, thank
 you all. It's been an honour and a privilege to cover another Ashes, and another remarkable summer of cricket.

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