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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

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These days, a vast number of youngsters are found to spend huge amount of time on virtual games rather than, outdoor activities.
This
 essay will explain the root cause of
this
 situation and
furthermore
, will express how
this
 is a negative growth. Primary factor why children are preferring software, games over a sport is because they produce thrilling experience. The 3d visualizations in these games make them believe that the gaming environment is real and thereby, make them addicted. It is reported by NDTV that, children who play Pub G games are involved into the game so much
such
 that, they do not realize that they have crossed 6 hours per day limit. It is
obviously
Suggestion
obvious
, detrimental for upbringing of a child.
children
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Children
 are
detoriating
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorating
 health and losing their precious time that could be utilised in future building skills.
Moreover
, they are unable to perform well in academics as they are not mentally and physically prepared for the examinations. To illustrate, when a survey was conducted by CNBC to understand the impact of
such
 games
on
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for
 students grades, it was found that 95% of students who do not play
such
 games passed in all the subjects. On
contrary
Suggestion
the contrary
, only 30% of students who play
such
 games have managed to clear all academic subjects. In conclusion, children are spending
larger amount
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a larger amount
 of time playing online computer games
instead
 of outdoor activities, due to
element
Suggestion
elements
the element
an element
such
 as thrill.
This
 could
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 lead to negative ramifications.
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