In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?
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infection
affliction
ignored
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ignore
person's character
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a person's character
society
as well as media.
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colour
boys
choice blue and the girls want to get pink. It Suggestion
boy's
boys'
is similar to the boys pick
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picks similar to the boys
is similar to the boys pick
childeren
. At that time, the men needed to make the strategies which how to get the animals, but the women talked with other women and a young person of either sex
children
childern
and so they got sympathy mind and a young person of either sex
children
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childeren
. They learn by these ones about a young person of either sex
children
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the role
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of father and mother is Suggestion
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example
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or as a driver Suggestion
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in
the bus, but the women Suggestion
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babysiter
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babysitter
baby-sitter
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jobs
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hospital
only member
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only members
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disability
don't deny
many Suggestion
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cook
are Suggestion
cooks
man
. It shows cook is not only woman's area Suggestion
men
a man
at
the Suggestion
of
restraunt
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restaurant
also
these change
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changes
is
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are
neccersary
. The children get absolutely essential
necessary
a
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an
influece
by their parents unconsciously. The parent's role changing which makes to be children get open mind, a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
furthermore they
become to be as a worker at Accept comma addition
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varying
society
which admit
a variety Suggestion
admits
person not
difference about sex, race and age.
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person, not
society
well as students. To change they pick a limit subject need to modify every part of society
gradually. As a reasult
, students get the subject a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
result
results
resort
freely
without hesitating.Suggestion
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