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With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays everyone is interested in sharing their personal reviews on the internet, whatever they purchased goods,
hence
 it's benefit to the new buyers in many ways. I will argue sharing views is how it will ultimately benefit to the customer.
Firstly
, Due to globalization, many products is coming to market from different countries
,
Accept space
,
 but same time no one saying what is good and bad on the items. In current generation many people are interested to share their personal view on the internet what ever purchased,
therefore
 it's automatically reached with public very fast and useful to the customers, because they can easily analysis on the brand and purchase if they interested.
Secondly
, most of the reviewers compared same device with different companies henceforth purchaser can easily understand the quality and price.
For Example
 As per the latest CNN survey many companies before launching material to market, they are doing analysing through YouTube based on the trend upgrading the stock.
On the other hand
, Mainly due to
this
 kind of reviews it's not benefiting to the consumer because if reviewer given bad feedback most of the people don't like to purchase
hence
 the company value will reduce in the market. On the top of that buyers are confusing because in search engine many reviews are there for one product,
moreover
, many of the reviewers don't have proper contact information in online
therefore
 we cannot able to trust with the reviews. In conclusion, I have argued that online product reviews are best to purchase a new item because buyer easily identify the value of the item and it's worth to spend an amount on required product or not and
finally
 benefit to consumers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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