Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward mention what they have done to help the community say what reward you would like to give this person Write about 150 words. You do not need to write addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear sir, I have enrolled in

computer

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a computer

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science

course

in your college. I have opted

this

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for this

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course

as I have always been fascinated to know how

data

transffered

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transferred

from

one

computer to another and

i

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I

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was always curious to know how

data

transffered

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transferred

from

one

network

to another.

This

data

network

is

one

of

my

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the

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interesting

subject

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subjects

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I would love to study and master. When I came for admission, I have told that

data

network

is

one

of the main

subject

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subjects

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I will be studying during the

course

and the faculties available in the college to teach

data

networks are the best faculties in the town and I will be mastered

this

subject

under there guidance.

However

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after joining the

course

it came to my

suprise

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surprise

that university has changed the syllabus of computer science with more focus on programming and

data

network

subject

will be

onluy

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only

touched upon in the laster semester of the

course

. In the

class

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,class

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we had

deep-dive

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a deep-dive

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discussion

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discussions

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with our lecturer as well

with

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as with

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our fellow

class

members on the importance of

data

network

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networks

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. All the

class

fellows are showing the same interest as I have and we as a

class

requesting college to had some extra classes to teach us

data

network

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networks

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which we are ready to pay

little

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a little

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extra from our pocket.